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A Poem by ThunderStorm

Author: ThunderStorm
Created: September 20, 2009 at 11:15 am
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Romance | Love | Spiritual
Upload Stats: 4.4 Stars by 5 users with 7 comments and 400 views

Valentine's day  

On febauary 14th it is a very good day for couples far and wide. which is valentine's day sometimes you have to respect a woman and make sure that a lady goes first if you planning go out to dinner. and make sure you escort a woman to her seat. that is acting a mighty fine gentlemen you make sure the lady will get her dinner then you go find what is the best to eat . but first make sure you eat a salad. then ask a your date how is everything. then after you eat you let the lady get up first that is a true gentlemen then make sure you escort your lady to the door. then the very next day you order a dozen of sweet red roses and a box of Candy then make sure you write a love letter to your lady friend . then the very next night you make dinner for her make sure you pour sparkling wine. then the dinner out of the oven. then make sure you pour the sparkling wine into glasses then after you had dinner you ask your lady if she can be your girlfriend and make sure you ask nicely then she ask you give her a couple of days then after you get down on one knee ask her if you married her oh thank all the poets I love all my poet girls here joan amanda timmie anna priya jasmine jenna take care you girls

Last Modified: November 25, 2009 at 09:52 pm
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Author Notes

my lucky date 2-14

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November 07, 2009
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this was quite an interesting read

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October 22, 2009
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The Truth
this is how every man should treat thier lady. i couyldnt agree more with you. that is how i ttreat the girls i go out with. but they tend to end the relationship for no reason but i just say "Your loss" cuz they will be missing out on a genuine smart guy.

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September 27, 2009
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Haha :D
Lol, sounds like you have some experience in this, from both sides, having done it right and wrong. Great job, seeming well informed in poetry is important. I love how you go into details, and you're right, this would work on a lot of girls. Amazing job, now all you need to do is teach all the rest of the guys in the world how to do this

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September 26, 2009
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Great write. Really enjoyed reading this one. Being a gentleman is one thing that never goes out of style. Actually, it defines your style. Nice tribute to the fine lady poets on this site. Keep writing!

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September 23, 2009
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Awwwww my precious little Gentle Soul, this is absolutely beautiful. I am sure that you are going to make someone very lucky to have such a gentleman as yourself.
Keep writing my precious little one.
Take care and good luck to you,
I love you, Timmie

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September 21, 2009
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Good words to the wise in there. Sounds like the words of a fine Southern Gentleman such as myself, clearly your momma raised you right (as my momma used to say). Nice work. D

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September 20, 2009
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Wow Thunder, a perfect gentleman you are Good ladies should be treated with utmost respect and politeness. Bet you get a lot dates for Valentines, of course everyday could be valentines day if you treat the gals this well,lol. Like your descriptions of the day after with cooking and sparkling wine, very awesome! Plato

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