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Starburst


Author: ThunderStorm
Created: August 31, 2009 at 06:50 pm
Entry Type: Chapter, G (All)
Category: Fantasy | Humor | Romance
Entry Stats: 5 Stars by 5 users with 7 comments 255 views

Starburst 
in a pretty pink mansion there is a beautiful 16-year old girl her name is strawberry she is so shy and talented even she has 5 dogs. her dogs names are lemon Apple plum and lime. even she has a beautiful mother her name is Joan D Strawberry Strawberry attends high school the school name West berry High. it was middle of semesters for the juniors the prom was only 3 weeks way and strawberry never went to the prom before.
so day by day she was hoping she find someone to go out for the prom. till then the very next day she got a note in her locker.
it said meet me at the berry patch after school love serect date
so strawberry walk to the berry patch till then she found her serect date strawberry ask him what is his name is and he said my name is shane L. Blueberry I play Berryball strawberry asked shane is it fun and shane said not as fun as you strawberry so shane and strawberry was walking in the berry patch. so that is a story of strawberry I will see you thee later


Last Modified: November 25, 2009 at 09:57 pm


Author Notes
I love you joan


 

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Comments & Reviews ( X 6)

MentalBreakdown
September 01, 2012

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what even
Very poorly constructed. The punctuation and the sentence flow was absolutely horrible, as well as the story. It honestly looks like something from someone out of kindergarten.

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kntinaz
October 02, 2009

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thats it
There's not much I can say after reading this..Imaginitive and flowing go t my heart going...Tony

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Xena
October 01, 2009

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omg
this is so good i love it you are god and baby jesus omg omg omg!!!

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wmmelvin
September 30, 2009

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nice
cool well constructed imaginative names.
I liked thiswrite.
good job.
I enjoy your style

peace
wmmelvin

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wmmelvin
September 30, 2009

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nice
cool well constructed imaginative names.
I liked thiswrite.
good job.
I enjoy your style

peace
wmmelvin

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ThePriestess
September 04, 2009

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Clap Clap Thunder, what a wonderful imagination you have my dear Gentle Soul.
Awww I love Joan and you as well.
Take care little one.
Love, Timmie

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JoanDZombie
September 03, 2009

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I LOVE YOU TOO THUNDER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Your
Friend
Joan

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