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♥ A Poem by iviedoeloves ♥


Author: PRO iviedoeloves
Created: April 26, 2005 at 01:24 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Romance | General/Other | General/Other
Upload Stats: 4 Stars by 4 users with 5 comments and 496 views

Sometimes I Forget  

~Sometimes I Forget~

Sometimes I forget
To say these things out loud
Leading me to regret
Your eyes full of doubtful clouds
I truly never meant
For this to happen
You know our love is heaven sent
And so do I
So please donít do it
I swear donít you cry
Sometimes I forget who I am to you
And only remember what
I want to be to me
Or at least I close my eyes to
What I donít want to see
So let me ease your pain
With a soft little kiss
Everything between us is still the same
As yesterdays bliss
Please I must shut my eyes to you
If youíre going to persist
This is not uncommon for me to do
Please no more guilt and pity I must insist
Sometimes I forget to say things
That I ought to say always indeed
I just need to reach for my brass rings
Itís something I have to do that I really need
Please donít look at me that way
Iím oh so very sorry you can see
And weíll wake up to a new day
When it will be a brand new story
So donít you dare cry
Dry your deep blue eyes
We know the stars in the skies
Are the same for you and me always
I would never leave you
I will never go astray
Except into myself
On my little shelf
All hope is never lost
Between you and I
Under the same sun, moon,
Stars and sky.



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Stargazer
May 29, 2005
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It's like one of those "kitchen table moments" when we see beyond the coffee cup....and wonder what other people think...about us...telling them how we feel...


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Katela
May 11, 2005
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A true love poem, good job


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TempestOfNature
April 26, 2005
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sometimes I forget as well but then i remember things that I can I try not to forget..thanks for sharing


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marsia
April 26, 2005
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it so much remind me of something i went through not to long ago


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April 26, 2005
this is a good poem, but i think that you should change the color of the words so that they are easier to read, I had to strain my eyes to read it.


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