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♥ Precious ♥

Author:   iviedoeloves
Created: April 26, 2005 at 01:16 pm
Entry Type: Poem, G (All)
Category: Love | General/Other | General/Other
Entry Stats: 4.66 Stars by 3 users with 4 comments 332 views
Precious 
~Precious~

Now is the time to be precious
Love someone with all your heart
Woo them into submission to
Become precious, as is their part

Wrap them in your arms at night
And swoon them during the day
With lunchtime rendezvous that invite
And shiny surprises will make them sway

Blooming roses never ever hurt
And candy’s OK as well
But a ring would really do the thing
To ring her pretty little bell

All of these things mean a lot
And none are considered absurd
But don’t ever do anything superficial though
Because actions speak louder than words

 
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Katela
May 11, 2005

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A perfect poem, the picture is very touching, and the words match, very nice work on this one
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jzachmann
April 27, 2005

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Ok, this font color is a lot better. Great job on this poem, and I think that you did a great job finding a picture that goes along with the poem. Great job, and keep up the great work.
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TempestOfNature
April 26, 2005

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beautiful written Ivie love the pic go's with the poem aww do such thing exist? i wonder....thanks for sharing
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April 26, 2005
ok, first of all, there is no writing on here. I don't know if the words are white or not, but you can't read it at all. just to let you know
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