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♥ Fan the Flames ♥

Author:   iviedoeloves
Created: April 26, 2005 at 01:02 pm
Entry Type: Poem, G (All)
Category: Love | General/Other | General/Other
Entry Stats: 4.5 Stars by 2 users with 2 comments 434 views
Fan the Flames 
Fan the Flames

An undying sort of fire
Look all around at the construction
Destruction
It leaves me wanting more to fan the flames
I can hear the wind calling my name
It’s not hard to hear the cry that reclaims
If you don’t remember
Then I don’t know what to say
But I will never forget
Until my dying day
That undying sort of fire
That screams all around me
Especially when I look
Into your deep blue eyes I see
What drives me especially crazy
And that I just may be
But I’m not so stupid
As to think for one moment in time
That you don’t love being mine
That you don’t love being mine

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Comments & Reviews

Katela
May 11, 2005

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A very good poem, keep up the good work
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TempestOfNature
April 26, 2005

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how romantic...such passion in this poem..thanks for sharing Ivie
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