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A Poem by mugenpower89

Author: mugenpower89
Created: August 24, 2009 at 02:04 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Romance | Free Verse | General/Other
Upload Stats: 5 Stars by 1 users with 2 comments and 344 views


let's go baby just you and me
let's watch the sun rise so vividly
every passing minute, every burning second
I can feel the fire coming from from your presence
sweat flows like lava
what do I do? I want you to feel
what my heart is doing when you creep near
I can't think of anything sweeter
than to watch the sun rise with you
two is such a beautiful number

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August 24, 2009
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Whoa, absolutely beautiful!!! Very romantic and infact breathtaking!! This is def. one of my favorites around and as well as the best. Keep it up, absolutely loved it!!

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August 24, 2009
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Hello, my name is Timmie, this is the first piece of your writing that I have gotten the opportunity to read. Thanks for sharing.
Awwwww what a precious and sweet piece of writing you have created here.
Take care and I look forward to seeing more in the future.

May the energy of the Moon shine brightly upon you throughout your life's journey!

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