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Yoshi


Author: ThunderStorm
Created: August 12, 2009 at 05:13 pm
Entry Type: Poem, G (All)
Category: Weird | Children's | Fantasy
Entry Stats: 4 Stars by 2 users with 5 comments 216 views

Yoshi 
On a small island There is a cute dinosaur his named is Yoshi this cute dinosaur has 20 brothers and sisters sometimes they protect a baby the baby's name is mario from the evil koopa's and the koopa's evil wizard named kamek a real pain in the neck I usally kick kamek's behind of all time on my nintendo. sometimes after I beat kamek there is always i have to deal with the main pain in the neck his name is the mighty koopa himself bowser but sometimes when the yoshi is terrfied of bowser.but the yoshi's have a weapon who can defeat the evil bowser it is the baby mario sometimes the yoshi's diet is shyguy piranhas goombas or penguins something like that and that is my poem about the cutest tiny green dinosaur of all time yoshi. good luck yoshi I love you as my favorite Idol


Last Modified: November 25, 2009 at 10:09 pm


Author Notes
From your friends thunderstorm and colorful dreamer


 

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Comments & Reviews ( X 5)

MisterDFoster
August 23, 2010

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cause l like yoshi too.

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ThePriestess
August 15, 2009

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Awwwww Thunder, this is so cute. I want a tiny green dinosaur now LOL. Thank you for the smile my friend.
Keep on writing, I look forward to seeing more in the future.
Take care my dear friend.
Timmie

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jeanthomas
August 14, 2009

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Oh, this is so cute thunder. I like it a lot. I'm not a fan of fantasy stories but reading them is really fun. a very cute poem.


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poetryladycat
August 12, 2009

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good
Paragraphs like this

On a small island There is a cute dinosaur
his named is Yoshi this cute dinosaur
has 20 brothers and sisters sometimes
they protect a baby the baby's name is mario
from the evil koopa's and the koopa's
evil wizard named kamek a real pain in the neck
I usally kick kamek's behind of all time on my nintendo.

Sometimes after I beat kamek there is always i have to
deal with the main pain in the neck his name is the
mighty koopa himself bowser but sometimes
when the yoshi is terrfied of bowser.

But the yoshi's have a weapon who can defeat
the evil bowser it is the baby mario sometimes the
yoshi's diet is shyguy piranhas goombas or
penguins something like that and that is
my poem about the cutest tiny green dinosaur of all time yoshi.

Good luck yoshi I love you as my favorite Idol.

ThePriestess
August 15, 2009
What in the world does that poetryladycat think she is doing, she did the same thing to me.



colorfuldreamer
August 12, 2009

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:D
Haha Yoshi is so cute great job.keep up the great work
Love
Kenzie
Colorfuldreamer

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