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♥ Ocean Ocean ♥


Author:   iviedoeloves
Created: April 20, 2005 at 06:04 pm
Entry Type: Poem, G (All)
Category: Personal | General/Other | General/Other
Entry Stats: 4.5 Stars by 6 users with 6 comments 438 views

Ocean Ocean 
~Ocean Ocean~

Ocean, ocean take me home,
The place you know I need to be.
Please tides take my woes out to sea,
My dearest Father God these things I plead.

The tide it ebbs and flows,
And look there go my woes.
Sand in my toes.

Ocean, ocean take me where I long to be
I love the starfish, seahorse and seaweed.
Dear Father above, you know what I need;
A message in a bottle, a tiny little seed.

All the Majesty of the sea belongs to you,
As well as the land and the air.
The trees rocks and bushes and me too!
I know you hear me, I know you care.
Let your ocean take me there.




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Comments & Reviews

Katela
May 11, 2005

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I love the ocean, and i love this poem, the picture is beautiful

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TigerStrp1
April 28, 2005

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a poem that flows like an ocean

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brokenhearted
April 23, 2005

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I LOVE THIS POEM, IVIE!!! KEEP IT UP!

~Sarah~

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SometimesIwrite
April 21, 2005

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very well written

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WindWhisperer
April 20, 2005

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I liked this write. It is nicely put together.

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TempestOfNature
April 20, 2005

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beautiful picture Ivie I just love the ocean view and the ocean itself. thanks for sharing I needed that

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