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♥ A Poem by iviedoeloves ♥

Author: PRO iviedoeloves
Created: April 20, 2005 at 03:47 am
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Haiku | General/Other | General/Other
Upload Stats: 4 Stars by 4 users with 4 comments and 597 views



Yellow of the sun
Green of the hills' sloping side
Blue of the ocean

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Author Notes

Hiaku in true form; being of nature.

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April 30, 2015
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This is a basic description of any nature layout but the way you did it is truley beautiful

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December 07, 2010
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ok haiku.Needs editing in black ink so we can read it.

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April 23, 2005
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CUTE! Very cute!

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April 20, 2005
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Simply well done! I love Haiku, but it does not love me! Good job!

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