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A 3-year old girl lost in woods Part 3


Author: ThunderStorm
Created: July 29, 2009 at 06:26 pm
Entry Type: Series, G (All)
Category: Romance | Spiritual | Adventure
Entry Stats: 4.3 Stars by 5 users with 6 comments 179 views

A 3-year old girl lost in woods Part 3 
Our story begins in the hosptial where jake lost his memories and molly was crying she think jake is not going surive or not so days went by so quickly so finally jake got his memory back molly was so happy even molly's mom joan d zombie was so happy and pleased she said i think molly like you a lot jake said she does like me and she said she wish she had a dad to be proud of when she graduated from 6th to 12th grade so days went by so jake ask joan if he can married her and joan said yes so together jake and joan got married and for molly she finally has a daddy now she so proud together this new family so are in love with each other so they play checkers or chess or connect 4 or tic- tac- toe they are so happy and this is my story how molly got lost in the woods and she finally found her mommy so much The End



Thanks for all the poets for making this story a
Good story thank you


Last Modified: November 25, 2009 at 10:17 pm

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Comments & Reviews ( X 2)

Desmond
August 10, 2009

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A very interesting write.
Good work>keep that pen of yours moving.

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ThePriestess
August 09, 2009

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Awwwwww Thunder, what a very touching story, this part made me smile. I am so glad that Molly was able to find happiness. Clap Clap to you my little friend.

Take care and I look forward to seeing more in the future.
Timmie

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Chowa
August 06, 2009

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Excellent
What a well crafted story, it would be kool to see this in a small story book, keep writing.

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frankilee79
August 02, 2009

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awww... such an icky sticky ending... I of course mean that in a good way, it was a very uplifting and happy story... thank u for finishing it...

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wayneleon
August 02, 2009

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That was a good story my friend. I could feel the tension with the loss of the little girl in the woods. You caught the tension well there. I enjoyed the ending too. Alls well that ends well. Keep writing my friend.

Yours in Darkness
Wayne Leon

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JoanDZombie
July 29, 2009

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YAY THIS WAS A GOOD STORY DOUBLE POINTS YES!!!!
YOUR
FRIEND
JOAN

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