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A Poem by ThunderStorm


Author: ThunderStorm
Created: July 19, 2009 at 07:16 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Fantasy | General/Other | Fantasy
Upload Stats: 4.2 Stars by 12 users with 14 comments and 287 views

Rain  

sometimes if it is real hot between 80 degrees or 100 degrees we get lots of rain now rain has 3 important elements heat wind and water if around the world gets rain we usally get damaging winds over 80 or 140 miles per a hour i know it is a lot of a force even is crazy once we get the torandoes or hurricanes even torandoes blow stuff away is crazy sometimes hurricanes get names for it like andrew katrina or emily these are the craziest hurricanes of all time or the dangerous powerful force on god's creation who we are to judge watch these powerful winds blow our houses away this is the most crazy stuff on wrecking the evil torandoes or hurricanes wrecking buildings or footballs fields or baseball stadium's sometime's they call off the game dude crazier weather we been having from the past years but today it was nice good but i feel sorry for las vegas arizona which i used to live and california all of these counties are under a heat waring till next saturaday so california needed some big time rain hopefully they will get it in august it is scroching hot in hollywood state but i do have friends in california my friend name is miss joan D Zombie she is the number 1poet of all time and the funniest poets and she does the coolest poems of all time she is a class act and she is the respective person to hang out with on the writers-network chat line and that my friends how is rain to take shape of god's mighty green earth thank you and may god treat you well

Last Modified: November 25, 2009 at 10:29 pm
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Eilidh333
December 28, 2009
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Rain has such a deep meaning to me, and many of the best moments of my life have been when it has been raining. It is just creates such a calm and trnquil mood where I feel that anything can happen and anything is possible. It trully makes me feel alive and makes everything real. You have used a great use of words to portray and capture your love for the rain. Amazing!


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JonLondon
November 05, 2009
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Wonderful use of words, bring this piece direct to the senses of the reader my friend, your style is enjoyable, deep and explores the boundaries of poetry to perfection...very well penned, your writing is impressive..and inspiring my friend...great work


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SchoolBoy17
September 15, 2009
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very nice! you have a strong sense of wording. which is the key to writing. Enough siad!


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xBloodRosex
September 07, 2009
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Love the rain
I love the rain. It's so sensual. It makes me feel alive and energetic... happy...


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Tsnyder_09
August 26, 2009
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Great
rain is magical
I love it as well


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ThePriestess
August 19, 2009
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Clap Clap, I love the rain too. My favorite is splashing in the puddles when it is raining. LOL and yes even at 40 years old I still do that. We don't get very much rain where I live. Maybe a couple times a year if we are lucky.
Thanks for sharing my little friend,
Take care, Timmie


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Priya
August 14, 2009
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i love rain...........too.....................


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singer123
August 05, 2009
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Rain...
i LOVE rain


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VAMPIREFREAK19
July 28, 2009
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i liked it very interesting topic ... and i love the rain


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Sakari
July 22, 2009
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very sweet! keep up the good work!


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classic13
July 22, 2009
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awww thats so sweet Thunder. Glad that Joan and the rest means so much to you. Glad to have you as a friend. Keep up the great work


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lanscape
July 20, 2009
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haha, i think you make a very good point
i like the rain.
if you think about it, it slows things down. you sleep in a little longer. you get to school or work a little later. and if you just sit and listen to it, it's so calm.
i love the rain and yes, to others, im pretty bizarre. but i do think its an amazing thing


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zoha
July 20, 2009
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really nice .........
enjoyed it
lolo


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JoanDZombie
July 19, 2009
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WOW THUNDER!! YOU WROTE ABOUT ME AGAIN!!
THAT IS FREEKIN SWEET!!!
I WILL GET DOUBLE POINTS BUT NOT IF I DONT HURRY!!
THANK YOU!
Your
Friend
Joan


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