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A Poem by ThunderStorm

Author: ThunderStorm
Created: July 16, 2009 at 04:26 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Humor | Spiritual | Children's
Upload Stats: 4 Stars by 2 users with 3 comments and 262 views

Unicorn and sarah the beautiful girl  

our story begins under a green slimy bridge there is a fairy that makes these crazy potions the fairy named was lavender a great fairy her house was torn down from a mighty wind later that day a beautiful girl named sarah she is a 12 year old brilliant girl was still in school till all suddnenly there was a crying from the mountains there up high in the mountains there is a baby unicorn trapped under a log so sarah climbed the steep mountain making sure doesn't slip or fall so finally sarah made it to the mountain top freeing the poor baby unicorn so they walk down the mountain sarah named the baby unicorn Joan D Zombie so the two very best of friends went to sarah's dad stable where sarah will feed the baby unicorn hay and carrots and plenty of fresh clean water and a nice warm blanket to make sure the baby unicorn won't freeze to death so day by day the two friends sleep together in sarah's dad stable so it was winter real bad there was a nice warm toasty stove so they warm up on it so till then it was spring the very the 2 best of friends went to the green slimy bridge where the great fairy will be waiting for the both of them so the fairy was looking at the baby unicorn it grow 4 inches sarah was amazed wow you grow 4 inches so the fairy told them be careful once the baby unicorn grows it grows till by summer it was a teenager unicorn so sarah took the teenager unicorn with her for show and tell at sarah's school so that's the end of Unicorn and sarah the beautiful girl

Last Modified: November 25, 2009 at 10:31 pm
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Comments & Reviews ( X 2)

August 22, 2009
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Awwww Thunder, this is a wonderful little story.
Clap clap to you my sweet friend.
This brought a smile to my face.
I am sure that Joan loves it too.
Take care and good luck to you my friend,

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July 16, 2009
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Not confusing but good anyway!

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July 16, 2009
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wow that was confusing
but i still enjoyed it

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