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♥ Twilight ♥


Author:   iviedoeloves
Created: April 14, 2005 at 09:46 pm
Entry Type: Poem, G (All)
Category: Sad | Romance | Love
Entry Stats: 4 Stars by 2 users with 2 comments 333 views

Twilight 
Twilight

The moon, the moon,
*Oh how I swoon*
When I gaze at the moon.

The stars, the stars,
*Still hiding our scars*
The winking, twinkling stars.

At twilight, that special light;
When some things,
Can not be seen.
I remember~
What it means,
To feel the shadow~
Where your love
*For only me*
Used to be.

Then there’s the sun, the sun~
*Oh how I love this one.*
In the direct bright light,
I feel less lonesome.

Ivie Doe



Author Notes
call me or Somethin' !!!

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drowning_in_you
April 19, 2005

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A simple yet well written poem.

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TempestOfNature
April 15, 2005

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hmm did I criq this one before..hmmm o well anyway very good ivie maybe everyone should look at the stars and the moon more often. Thanks for sharing

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