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A Poem by ThunderStorm


Author: ThunderStorm
Created: July 12, 2009 at 09:58 am
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Romance | Love | Spiritual
Upload Stats: 4.5 Stars by 4 users with 4 comments and 215 views

We Who Have Loved  

we who have loved alas! may not be

friends too faint or yet too fierce

the stifled fire a random spark and

lo! our dread desire leaps into flame

as though to make amends for chill

blank days and strange fury rends the

dying embers of love's funeral prye.

Electric, Charged anew, the living

wire a burning message through our

torpor sends Could we pledge with

loyal hearts and eyes a friendship

worthy of the fair full past now

multilate and lost beyond recall,

then might a phoenix from its ashes

rise fit for soul flight: but we find

agast love must be nothing if not

all in all


Last Modified: November 25, 2009 at 10:45 pm
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Author Notes


Anna And thunderstorm boyfriend and girlfriend forever


 
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Comments & Reviews



SarahPearl
August 22, 2009
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I love it! this is a really, really good piece!


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VAMPIREFREAK19
July 28, 2009
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i loved it... so sweet and romantic


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dazedforever
July 14, 2009
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wow
this is fantastic, very well written, with a profoud meaning,
the title is very striking, good piece, keep it up and keep writing!


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mollywillow
July 14, 2009
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AMAZING
I love this! I loved how you used old fashioned writing!


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