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A Poem by ThunderStorm

Author: ThunderStorm
Created: July 11, 2009 at 01:22 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Romance | Love | Spiritual
Upload Stats: 5 Stars by 1 users with 2 comments and 271 views

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a girl alone in this world ice blue

eyes wary fair hair long and curled

she used to force a smile hiding true

emotion eyes harder than tile But now

she has you Someone to love her

smiles now true she glows when you're

showing her true emotions no longer

as unpredictable as the tide her

heart swoons at your touch gentle yet

protective showing you care so much

and when you press your lips so

softly to hers holding perfectly

together her heart beat skips Can't

you see how much you've helped her

set her free free from feeling alone

and for once having someone to call

her own so stay with her and hold her

tight Ensure it will be her you'll

love every day and every night

Last Modified: November 25, 2009 at 10:49 pm
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Author Notes

This is my dream I had 2 nights ago when anna and I got married during her senior prom

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July 12, 2009
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lol lovely dream

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July 11, 2009
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Nice job you have done with this one.

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