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A Poem by ThunderStorm


Author: ThunderStorm
Created: July 11, 2009 at 01:19 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Romance | Love | Spiritual
Upload Stats: 4.9 Stars by 5 users with 6 comments and 222 views

The storm and the rose  

loss of control falling feather and

feather down in this hole I'm done

playing around no more begging and

pleading no more am i down on my

knees I have the key to my heart so

just bringing me down lower and lower

Careless and confused falling to the

ground with crashing all around

begging for forgiveness Screaming to

the heavens have mercy on me in my

weakness I lost all my faith Now

that's its been found I'll brace my

self for the on coming storm you'll

not last i'll take what you give

Fragile i may be but i'll see this

though Every storm passes so while I

wait for you to pass I'll be the

white rose glistering in the light of

the storm


Last Modified: November 25, 2009 at 10:50 pm
© ThunderStorm - all rights reserved

Author Notes


Best friends anna and amanda and thunderstorm


 
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Comments & Reviews ( X 4)



Priya
July 12, 2009
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ok this is beautiful
u just made urself a new follower to these AMAZING poems u seem to write
wow


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plato
July 11, 2009
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Great write!
Hey Thunder, really enjoyed the smooth flow and soul searching in this piece. Great ending and title as well. Bravo, Plato


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anna_marques
July 11, 2009
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awww
an amazing poem honey thunder!
i love it so much! i have always believed in you, you believe in me?
thank you sooo much for this amazing poem!!
you always have your ways on me =)
Kisses, Ragdah (Anna)


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frankilee79
July 11, 2009
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I like it!!!! Very spriritual...


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ThePriestess
July 11, 2009
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Fantastic my dear. Such emotion. Clap Clap.
Keep up the great work, Timmie


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classic13
July 11, 2009
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wow Thunder, this poem is seriously sweet, like im actually speechless. ur the best Thunder always remember that.


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