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Dance with me


Author: ThunderStorm
Created: July 11, 2009 at 12:25 am
Entry Type: Poem, G (All)
Category: Romance | Love | Spiritual
Entry Stats: 4.75 Stars by 2 users with 3 comments 199 views

Dance with me 
Baby, Dance with me Slow let me fly

with you While the band plays low

Till the night is through The lights

of the Candles Look like stars

around the room I'll try be careful

But I know I'm not Immune 'Cause I

Just Can't Imagine How I'd ever come

to harm With this feeling As you hold

me in your arms Baby, Dance with me

slow Till we barely move Let that

crowd Rock And Roll While we Share

this Groove And Float like two

Shadows In and Out and in between

Those faces all around us At the edge

of this dream And it won't even

matter If they stare as we go by

I'm aware of only your love In this

world Of you and I Baby, Dance with

me slow Let me fly with you...


Last Modified: November 25, 2009 at 10:53 pm


Author Notes
the night of midnight hours the princess anna and prince jonathan dancing the night away


 

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Comments & Reviews

ThePriestess
July 11, 2009

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So elegant and full of class, fantastic job you have done on this one dear.
Clap Clap!!!!!
Take care, Timmie

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tarantulla81
July 11, 2009

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very beautiful piece..its so sweet.

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mantisman
July 11, 2009

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Ooooh
Lots of emotion in this piece.Loved it! But I kind of wanted to yell "Get a room you two!"..lol
Nice one. Thanks-Joe

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