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Waterfalls


Author: ThunderStorm
Created: July 11, 2009 at 12:23 am
Entry Type: Poem, G (All)
Category: Romance | Love | Spiritual
Entry Stats: 4.66 Stars by 3 users with 4 comments 207 views

Waterfalls 
as the waters flow from the rivers to

the sea continusoly shaping, changing

they affect all they touch so does my

love for thee Progessively molding,

forming, affecting my life in every

way and so very much as the mountains

which lay dormant for so very long

until caressed by the waters rushing

through them awakened to new life

that sweetly flows within so is my

love for thee for what dormant for so

very long until thy gentle kiss thy

tender touch thy loving words which

mean so much Caused a river of love

to burst forth it awakened my heart,

my love to a new life a life that may

never find peace but in thy loving

arms as the mountains, rivers and

waterfalls become one so must we...


Last Modified: November 25, 2009 at 10:56 pm


Author Notes
I love my Anna


 

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Comments & Reviews

GABSTBOZ
August 07, 2010

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Hi Thunder
Beautiful writing with the flow of life in "Waterfalls" . Great thoughts, " ... waterfalls become one so must we."

Smiles
Gabs

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darkelegy
November 19, 2009

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great piece my friend...love the words you use here...I' miss my helena...lol! a' toss for this one!

your buddy...darkelegy

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ThePriestess
July 11, 2009

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Your imagery in this piece of writing is fantastic, thank you for sharing, I really enjoyed this one.
Keep up the great work
Take care and good luck to you in all of your life's endeavors.
Timmie

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tarantulla81
July 11, 2009

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very deep and emotionally clever writing. i like how you compare emotions and feelings with water.

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