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A Short Story by ThunderStorm

Author: ThunderStorm
Created: July 08, 2009 at 08:09 pm
Upload Type: Short Story, G (All)  
Category: Romance | Love | General/Other
Upload Stats: 4.25 Stars by 2 users with 4 comments and 358 views

puzzle piece love  

Our love is like a puzzle

And we are each a puzzle piece.

The times we’ve spent together

Fit us closer piece by piece.

At times we will lose focus

Forget the bigger picture

The puzzle seems all jumbled

And nothing fits together

But remember our first love

And who got us here

He knows the whole plan

And holds us very dear

If we only trust His love

He’ll make our worries cease.

And we’ll watch as He forms

Our love story’s masterpiece.

Last Modified: November 25, 2009 at 10:59 pm
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Comments & Reviews ( X 2)

July 10, 2009
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This was a wonderful write on love and time, a love's master piece, how fitting! Well done. I really like the analogy of love as a puzzle, indeed it is, most times, Plato

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July 09, 2009
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I love this beautiful piece. It's calming and peaceful and encouraging. It makes me feel like everything will be okay. I love that you made a metaphor between love and a puzzle and I think that you did that very well. the whole thing flows very well and . . . makes me smile very beautiful and refreshing. thanks for sharing this.

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July 09, 2009
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Very nice write. It was an very enjoyable read. It flowed well, and the words were great. Take Care.

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July 08, 2009
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Awwwww. beautifully written. Thank you for sharing.
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Take care and good luck to you in all of your life's endeavors.

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