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A Short Story by ThunderStorm


Author: ThunderStorm
Created: July 08, 2009 at 08:09 pm
Upload Type: Short Story, G (All)  
Category: Romance | Love | General/Other
Upload Stats: 4.25 Stars by 2 users with 4 comments and 211 views

puzzle piece love  

Our love is like a puzzle

And we are each a puzzle piece.

The times we’ve spent together

Fit us closer piece by piece.





At times we will lose focus

Forget the bigger picture

The puzzle seems all jumbled

And nothing fits together





But remember our first love

And who got us here

He knows the whole plan

And holds us very dear





If we only trust His love

He’ll make our worries cease.

And we’ll watch as He forms

Our love story’s masterpiece.


Last Modified: November 25, 2009 at 10:59 pm
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Comments & Reviews ( X 2)



plato
July 10, 2009
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This was a wonderful write on love and time, a love's master piece, how fitting! Well done. I really like the analogy of love as a puzzle, indeed it is, most times, Plato


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ccalin822
July 09, 2009
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I love this beautiful piece. It's calming and peaceful and encouraging. It makes me feel like everything will be okay. I love that you made a metaphor between love and a puzzle and I think that you did that very well. the whole thing flows very well and . . . makes me smile very beautiful and refreshing. thanks for sharing this.


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clb520
July 09, 2009
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Very nice write. It was an very enjoyable read. It flowed well, and the words were great. Take Care.


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ThePriestess
July 08, 2009
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Awwwww. beautifully written. Thank you for sharing.
Clap Clap
Take care and good luck to you in all of your life's endeavors.
Timmie


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