A Poem by ThunderStorm

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Author: ThunderStorm
Created: July 01, 2009 at 09:38 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)
Category: Romance | Love | Spiritual
Upload Stats: 4.7 Stars by 5 users with 6 comments and 269 views

Katrina

Devastion from wind and surge, broken levees our land

submerge. hardships, losses we can see separated familes

there will be What would be saved was placed in sacks And our

clothes upon our backs Journey's taken across this land,

seeking shelter where we can support and comfort we could

find from loving folks that were so kind from this world the love

they give, Gives us hope, new life we'll live

© ThunderStorm - all rights reserved

Author Notes

I did this for my cousin katrina

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colorfuldreamer
July 02, 2009
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Great Poem

I love it, so much feeling said so quickly so easily, it is wonderful. Great job, keep up the great work.
Love
Kenzie
Colorfuldreamer

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deep_soul
July 02, 2009
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nice

simple with good imagination.........keep it up.....

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kntinaz
July 02, 2009
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Special

lot said in a few and yet the whole event comes rushing back in...Thanks tony

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shannonstarling
July 01, 2009
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Commenting again because I love you and want to send you some points so you can post another LALALA

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Dom1n1ck
July 01, 2009
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Nice

Great rhyme scheme, tight, concise, impactful. This was really good.

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shannonstarling
July 01, 2009
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Oh Thunder. This was amazing. You worked so hard though the words flow effortlessly, like they're meant to be there. I really liked this, I am spotlighting.

Great write

Keep writing and don't stop believing. A great poem comes from the heart and soul, not the educated mind.

<3 Shannon Starling.

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