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A Short Story by ThunderStorm


Author: ThunderStorm
Created: June 24, 2009 at 10:27 pm
Upload Type: Short Story, G (All)  
Category: Romance | Love | Gothic
Upload Stats: 4.9 Stars by 5 users with 8 comments and 271 views

The deadman's poem  

the spirit of the undertaker lives within the soul of all mankind

the enteral flame of life that cannot be extingushed the orgin of

which cannot be explained the orgin of which cannot be

explained the answer lies in the everlasting spirit soo all

mankind will witness the rebirth of the undertaker I will not rest

in peace


Last Modified: August 12, 2009 at 05:26 pm
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Comments & Reviews ( X 2)



GABSTBOZ
August 07, 2010
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Hi thunder
"The Dead man's Poem" grabs from the grave, it carries a torch to light the darkness where the shadows sway.

Smiles
Gabs


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darkelegy
November 14, 2009
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logically deep!
I' dig this one my friend the rebirth of the undertaker! such an icon of gloom...
thank you for sharing this piece...your friend darkelegy...


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single16
October 03, 2009
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Great
i like that. i like any kind of poem that is dark


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ThePriestess
August 22, 2009
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Clap clap to you my friend. Thunder, this is a very deep piece of writing you have created here, good job to you my friend.
Thanks for being so sweet and sharing your writing.
Take care, Timmie


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Jaxx009
July 03, 2009
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Good read
I really liked this poem, it flows very nicely. Very interesting.


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colorfuldreamer
June 30, 2009
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Wow
You're poems really make me think. Great job, so much logic must be used to understand this, even though it is simple. The way it is written shows that this probably means more to you than it does the reader. Often that is how poetry works, the reader can't get the same poem and feeling as the poet. Great job.
Love
Kenzie
Colorfuldreamer


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Daisuke
June 28, 2009
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Perfection cannot be explained, nice poem!!


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emoprincess10
June 27, 2009
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its really good im sal a lost of words its that good


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