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A Short Story by ThunderStorm


Author: ThunderStorm
Created: June 24, 2009 at 10:20 pm
Upload Type: Short Story, G (All)  
Category: Romance | Love | Spiritual
Upload Stats: 1 comments and 202 views

love days

there is darkness inside my pain is suffering around me my

Immortal heart is in vain but the pieces of the puzzle is falling

I give you a good reason my lost is not futile I just hope I will find

my destiny


© ThunderStorm - all rights reserved


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colorfuldreamer
June 30, 2009
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Wow...
So helpless, yet so strong. It takes a good poet to put such conflicting emotions into one short little poem so well. This is amazing, Great job on the feeling, once someone really reads this poem, it shows how strong emotions can be, yet when they just read, let the words slip past, they really can't understand any. Keep up the great work.
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Kenzie
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