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A Poem by ThunderStorm


Author: ThunderStorm
Created: June 24, 2009 at 10:09 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Romance | Love | Spiritual
Upload Stats: 4.7 Stars by 5 users with 6 comments and 224 views

My Angel  

For you my sweet angel I would die I'd pick all the stars from the

sky and give them all just for you to let you know how much I

love you My angel I'll love you all enternity I would do anything for

you sweetie I wrote this poem from my heart to let you know your

my sweetheart Please stay with me forever take my hand and

let's be together let's fly up to the heavens above And show

everyone we are in love


© ThunderStorm - all rights reserved


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jessica_08
July 14, 2010
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wounderful
wow thunder...this is sooo sweet...i can feel the love.... well done friend

Jessica


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clb520
July 13, 2009
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This is a wonderful write also. You truly are a gifted writer. Keep up the good work. I look forward to reading more.


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hotbreeze987
July 05, 2009
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Amazing
I absolutley loved it.
It's filled with so much emotion, and I just found myself smiling while i read it=)
This is one of my favorites, PLEASE keep it up.
Your friend=)
-Brianna


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colorfuldreamer
June 30, 2009
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Amazing
So simple yet so complex, so hard to understand yet easy to follow. This means so much, and says so much, yet it isn't overcome by emotion. The emotion is easy to follow, yet it still takes enough brain power that the readers attention won't wander. Great job. Keep it up.
Love
Kenzie
colorfuldreamer


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Peacelovr
June 26, 2009
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Awww this is just so sweet and beautiful. Filled with such adoration, hope and love. I have an angel too, and I always write about him...I can relate to this poem immensly. Wonderful writing and this piece is filled with such irrevocable beauty. Well done!!


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ladygothicka
June 25, 2009
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Again, an excellent piece of poetry. Wonderful emotions throughout, a lovely structure.


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