beautiful piece. It sounds like you dedicate this to someone special. "Never it will rain again, i see endles sunshine in your smile" i just love that lie, very touching and meaningful................Good job, from SunnieLA
This is a wonderful write. This is the first piece I have read of yours, but I look forward to reading more. You write with such passion, and I enjoy that. You also write with your heart. Which is a true wonderment, because the words you have chosen are amazing.
Amazing, it says so much in a way that says so little. It isn't a long poem but it explains everything perfectly. It has great flow and really makes the reader concentrate. The feelings are there, strongly visibly, without taking over the poem completely. Great job, keep up the great work.