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In your eyes

Author: ThunderStorm
Created: June 24, 2009 at 09:44 pm
Entry Type: Poem, G (All)
Category: Romance | Love | Spiritual
Entry Stats: 4.4 Stars by 5 users with 7 comments 230 views
In your eyes 
In your eyes I see beauty all that is wonderful in this world All I

ever wanted and prayed for in a girl In your eyes I see the ocean.

such peace you bring to the sea I see warm waters in your heart

you seem to have that effect on me In your eyes I see the sky.

Never will it rain again I see endless sunshine from your smile.

this happiness has no end Of all the things I see in you and the.

many wonders in your eyes I see I hope to blessed with you. to

look in your eyes and always see me

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Comments & Reviews ( X 3)

Tjejma
August 22, 2010

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Ahh how amusing, and wonderful to just lean back and read your poetry. God bless you Jonathan.
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SunnieLA
October 24, 2009

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beautiful piece. It sounds like you dedicate this to someone special. "Never it will rain again, i see endles sunshine in your smile" i just love that lie, very touching and meaningful................Good job, from SunnieLA
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plato
September 20, 2009

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Awesome!
Hey thunder, great poem got a super spiritual feeling from this write. Sounds like love and life and maybe a higher power. Great read, Plato
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clb520
July 13, 2009

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This is a wonderful write. This is the first piece I have read of yours, but I look forward to reading more. You write with such passion, and I enjoy that. You also write with your heart. Which is a true wonderment, because the words you have chosen are amazing.
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colorfuldreamer
June 30, 2009

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Great job!
Amazing, it says so much in a way that says so little. It isn't a long poem but it explains everything perfectly. It has great flow and really makes the reader concentrate. The feelings are there, strongly visibly, without taking over the poem completely. Great job, keep up the great work.
Love
Kenzie
Colorfuldreamer
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ladygothicka
June 25, 2009

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The flowing nature of the poem helped it to catch the attention of the reader, and then the emotion took over. Great writing, it captivated me and drew me in. Amazing.
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Dom1n1ck
June 24, 2009

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The end is missing a word or two I think. I like the start though your sentences would flow easier as couplets. Good start here though. Keep writing. D
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