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The angels weep


Author: ThunderStorm
Created: June 24, 2009 at 09:33 pm
Entry Type: Poem, G (All)
Category: Romance | Love | Drama
Entry Stats: 4.5 Stars by 2 users with 2 comments 170 views

The angels weep 
this tearhat brims upon my lash I've never felt before.

the joyous feel of hopes undashed of love, refined and pure.

Its passage burns a white-hot trail Emotions newly found. Your

happiness fills me like a sail My feet have left the ground.

No tears no more of hurt or pain as make the angels weep.

a Thousand years of night and rain. I'll serenade your sleep.

Although I've never heard your voice.

Or heard you speak my name Flame eternal make your choice.

do you feel the same


Last Modified: March 20, 2010 at 03:28 pm

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Comments & Reviews

colorfuldreamer
June 30, 2009

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Wonderful
This obviously means so much to you, it has typical feelings, yet they give off a different feel. Great job, it's always hard to capture something so usual yet make it so new. Amazing job, I love it. The only thing I can suggest would be to get it into paragraph form so a flow is easier to find for the reader. Other than that, great job.
Love
kenzie
Colorfuldreamer

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Dom1n1ck
June 27, 2009

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Cool
really nice rhymes.

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