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A Poem by ThunderStorm

Author: ThunderStorm
Created: June 18, 2009 at 05:53 pm
Upload Type: Poem, M (16+)  
Category: Dark | Sad | Gothic
Upload Stats: 4.87 Stars by 4 users with 6 comments and 289 views

Angel of lust  

Majestic with his dark beauty full of pain under the sky.

he Stays and is wandering in the lust night He is looking for the

next victim the next lost soul: fallen angel from heaven needs

some vitcim He's so sad in this moment he is looking for you

On God's soul you pray your prayer but for you want the light of

angel... light of lucifer the moon reveals the hope of prodigy.

you will cry this night when the angel of lust will come to bring

with him to hell You! virigin of the lake your tears are pearls

drained by the angels sharp tongue let you fall into the embrace

of evil God cannot save you this night Lucifer master of elegant

brutality virgin enchanted by the penetrating glance of her

master she is crying I hear her sobs the night with his wings

covers the ceremony of souls you are the virgin of luicifer! you

will burn in the lake of flames you will enter the infernal world

you'll be damned

Last Modified: March 20, 2010 at 03:27 pm
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Author Notes

i love it

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Comments & Reviews ( X 5)

November 22, 2009
Helpful? Thumbs UpThumbs Down is! thun! I really dig this must be one of your best dark potry I should say!...darkelegy...

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July 01, 2009
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This is the first piece of your writing that I have gotten the opportunity to read. I am very impressed. Thank you for sharing.
This creation of yours is dark, powerful, intense.....all of the perfect ingredients for a fantastic piece of dark writing.
Clap Clap to you!
Take care and I look forward to seeing more in the future, Timmie

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June 30, 2009
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Great imagery, really powerful phrasing, well executed, this was good.

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June 22, 2009
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and she gave in by own free will

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June 21, 2009
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The sad hunt. It was very dark which is right up my alley. I enjoyed it. I felt a little bit of jumping...maybe a bit more filler would balance it out. But there's a lot of power in there. Good write!

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June 19, 2009
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Hey Thunder, this is an interesting poem, sharp and talented. Enjoyed the vocabulary and free style of this write very much. "Virgin of the lake your tears are pearls", sweet line. Thanks for all your kind comments on my essays, its nice to know some people can still handle the truth. You are wise, Plato

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