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♥ A Poem by iviedoeloves ♥


Author: PRO iviedoeloves
Created: April 06, 2005 at 10:08 am
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Dark | General/Other | General/Other
Upload Stats: 4 Stars by 2 users with 2 comments and 364 views

The one Who...  

The One WhoÖ


To my disease
Iím on my knees.
To my disease
Iím on my knees.
Canít help but want to please
Everyone Iíve ever met or will meet.
I fall from my feet,
To my disease.
Canít help but get sent
Over the tips.
Then swooning when Iím bent
Over at the hips.
Broken at being taken,
Shaken and forsaken.
Canít they see the one who really loves,
Is me?
Can anybody hear me?
Is this hard to understand?
I just want to be me.
To feel me is at your hand.
To my disease
Iím on my knees.
So on many a page
Iíve let go of my rage,
But just not so you could see.
Thatís not really me
Because thatís not who I want to be.
Canít they see the one who really loves,
Is me?


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Comments & Reviews



MaryJane
April 07, 2005
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Haha I like this poem. Originally expressed ...


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TempestOfNature
April 07, 2005
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cool write Ivie I didn't see your poem until now...i guess they can see you if they fear you..thanks for sharing good job


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