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♥ The one Who... ♥

Author:   iviedoeloves
Created: April 06, 2005 at 10:08 am
Entry Type: Poem, G (All)
Category: Dark | General/Other | General/Other
Entry Stats: 4 Stars by 2 users with 2 comments 324 views
The one Who... 
The One Who…


To my disease
I’m on my knees.
To my disease
I’m on my knees.
Can’t help but want to please
Everyone I’ve ever met or will meet.
I fall from my feet,
To my disease.
Can’t help but get sent
Over the tips.
Then swooning when I’m bent
Over at the hips.
Broken at being taken,
Shaken and forsaken.
Can’t they see the one who really loves,
Is me?
Can anybody hear me?
Is this hard to understand?
I just want to be me.
To feel me is at your hand.
To my disease
I’m on my knees.
So on many a page
I’ve let go of my rage,
But just not so you could see.
That’s not really me
Because that’s not who I want to be.
Can’t they see the one who really loves,
Is me?

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melissa
April 07, 2005

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Haha I like this poem. Originally expressed ...
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TempestOfNature
April 07, 2005

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cool write Ivie I didn't see your poem until now...i guess they can see you if they fear you..thanks for sharing good job
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