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♥ Kindred Spirits ~~~ ♥


Author:   iviedoeloves
Created: June 09, 2009 at 01:48 pm
Entry Type: Poem, G (All)
Category: Romance | Love | Personal
Entry Stats: 4.4 Stars by 5 users with 5 comments 297 views

Kindred Spirits ~~~ 


Kindred Spirits ~~~

What tickles your fancy to play, Soul mate??
The things kindred spirits do in forever!??!
Would you come over today, a play date?!
Oh, the things we could do, us; together!?!

Now when you come over to my little house,
And play in my greener, lush, big backyard,
We could run all about like cats after mouse?
Frolicking, as children; back again and toward!!!

So we'll make the rules go these ways, and thats,
The way kids can always change them to fit.
We'll make up our own new ways to wear our hats.
And we don't care what anyone else thinks one bit!

And, while we are here we will understand;
That everyone else wants to be here, as well; it's true.
Tho, you are the only that can hold my hand;
For you are the only that I will tell, my every secret to.

Well now, that's the way it shall with us always be;
The rules of love, and play between you, and me.
Just the way kindred spirits do, when loving and free;
Whether with others there, or if it is just; me, and thee.


iviedoe 6. 09


Last Modified: December 28, 2009 at 09:10 pm


Author Notes
Tho, you are the only that can hold my hand;
For you are the only that I will tell, my every secret to.



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Comments & Reviews ( X 5)

andrea99
October 23, 2013

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Good
This was marvelous....

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lucky
September 09, 2009

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Excellent Poem
Lighthearted, playful piece that warms the readers heart. Every uplifting and Excellent write. Take care Lucky

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emk69
June 09, 2009

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love this piece :)
The begging to the end
full of love and Destiny
we all have another meant for us
your poem flows into the realm
of all true love gives us a a feeling
overpowering glow of being fully loved
BRAVO

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tecumseh
June 09, 2009

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Great poem. I loved it.

Tecumseh


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writer098
June 09, 2009

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great
i really liked it. you have some great ideas i like the fact that it is a romance one and you should keep writing i am going to check back with you to see more.

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