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♥ A Poem by iviedoeloves ♥

Author: PRO iviedoeloves
Created: May 29, 2009 at 08:06 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Love | Personal | Psychology
Upload Stats: 5 Stars by 1 users with 2 comments and 441 views

just a note~  

just a note~

it is a generous passion that can and will ignite,
joy; in all who may feel left, to actually feel all right.

it's powerful healing makes all forever bright,
the darkness of those living; without ever having sight.

it has measure, and heft like that of a burden's bite;
yet is never cumbersome, for its weight is oh so light.

its takes precedence over your whole will, and its might;
then gifts to you, true joy; blessing your life in delight.

faith, hope and love

but the greatest of these is love

it sneaks up on a heart like,
a bolt of blue from above~


it blasts thru your fibers like,
a tropical gale wind and a shove


it fits softly into the thoughts of your mind,
like a maidens tender hand into a kid glove~


it is worth every bit of your time and energy,
for it is what life's priceless memories are made of~


ivie doe 2009

Last Modified: December 24, 2010 at 08:03 am
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but the greatest of these is love

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August 21, 2012
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Faith, Hope and I love this poem. Well done! The rhyming pattern is great.

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May 30, 2009
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Great Poem
Love is what makes it all
worth while turn and look
someone beside you and there smile
we all need to be loved and give it too
Really nice job

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