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♥ Cool Baby ♥

Author:   iviedoeloves
Created: April 03, 2005 at 07:53 pm
Entry Type: Poem, G (All)
Category: Erotica | General/Other | General/Other
Entry Stats: 3.66 Stars by 3 users with 3 comments 336 views
Cool Baby 
Kickin' it with my cool baby.
Baby cool and me chilling the whole room.
You drive me crazy cool baby,
You make me feel shifty and I swoon.
Forever more yours I'll be,
Just one taste baby cool and you'll see-
Your own personal cool baby lover,
Entirerly yours and exclusively.
So I attentivly make the chase,
As interesting and intense with haste-
When I state my charming case,
as within the limits that the law allows.
Unlock your gates of your cat house,
And throw away the key.
I'm a tenacious one-
As you will soon see.
And shine bright as the sun,
Because I'm in love with you.
You're my cool cool baby,
And there's no doubt or maybe,
That you glow and resonate,
Just as a slow hand soulmate.
And you beam as cool as the moon.
So give me my bliss
And make it soon
Take me to your oasis
Cool baby, just catch me as I swoon

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agreatpoetj06
April 04, 2005

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good job
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milligan
April 04, 2005

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You go girl! Great flow!
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TempestOfNature
April 03, 2005

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cool cool cool baby! am lovin this poem Ivie such gentle words and erotic aura. thanks for sharing
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