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♥ Unbelievable ♥

Author:   iviedoeloves
Created: April 01, 2005 at 09:30 pm
Entry Type: Poem, G (All)
Category: Erotica | General/Other | General/Other
Entry Stats: 4 Stars by 2 users with 3 comments 357 views
Unbelievable 
Unbelievable

It’s incredible
Me sitting on the edge of this chair
So perfect, like a dancing bear
The flea circus is in town
And I’m so sensitive all around
So talented just like them.

I jump so instinctively
And ask “How high?” on the way up
I’m your little pup
Because I loved you first
I’ll do anything for which you thirst.

 
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BobQuinn
April 02, 2005

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I too was on the edge of my chair while reading this, squinting...nose to the screen to make out the tiny little letters that amuse me so much. AH but it was worth it!
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TempestOfNature
April 02, 2005

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how exotic this poem is. i like it such intensity fill the air. thnaks for sharing
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April 01, 2005
I wrote it so I love it!
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