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♥ A Good Smoke ♥

Author:   iviedoeloves
Created: April 01, 2005 at 09:17 pm
Entry Type: Poem, G (All)
Category: Weird | General/Other | General/Other
Entry Stats: 3.5 Stars by 2 users with 5 comments 423 views
A Good Smoke 
A good smoke


I really love a good smoke
It calms me when I’m nervous
And gives me something to do
when I’m bored
Slowly I inhale and exhale
And watch the haze fill the room
But then there’s the smoke
Coming off the end of the cigarette,
You know,
The stuff that kills other people?

 
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Black_Paint
February 07, 2009

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I an relate to this
But the ending has made me think
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BobQuinn
April 02, 2005

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I thought there for a moment you were about to write about my former favorite brand. "Whew!" But you are just a smoker, not a "SMOKER" (wink wink)
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TempestOfNature
April 02, 2005

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yea that true about that about the other end of the stick. but hey if it makes a good smoke for you go for it! thanks for sharing
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April 01, 2005
we all love a good smoke once in a while great write!
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April 01, 2005
Can I really just critiue my own poems like this? excellent work, Ivie !
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