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♥ A Poem by iviedoeloves ♥


Author: PRO iviedoeloves
Created: April 01, 2005 at 09:17 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Weird | General/Other | General/Other
Upload Stats: 3.5 Stars by 2 users with 5 comments and 455 views

A Good Smoke  

A good smoke


I really love a good smoke
It calms me when Iím nervous
And gives me something to do
when Iím bored
Slowly I inhale and exhale
And watch the haze fill the room
But then thereís the smoke
Coming off the end of the cigarette,
You know,
The stuff that kills other people?


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Black_Paint
February 07, 2009
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I an relate to this
But the ending has made me think


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BobQuinn
April 02, 2005
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I thought there for a moment you were about to write about my former favorite brand. "Whew!" But you are just a smoker, not a "SMOKER" (wink wink)


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TempestOfNature
April 02, 2005
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yea that true about that about the other end of the stick. but hey if it makes a good smoke for you go for it! thanks for sharing


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April 01, 2005
we all love a good smoke once in a while great write!


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April 01, 2005
Can I really just critiue my own poems like this? excellent work, Ivie !


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