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♥ Twilight ♥


Author:   iviedoeloves
Created: April 01, 2005 at 09:12 pm
Entry Type: Poem, G (All)
Category: General/Other | General/Other | General/Other
Entry Stats: 4.5 Stars by 2 users with 3 comments 560 views

Twilight 
Twilight


The moon the moon
Oh how I swoon
When I gaze t the moon.

The stars, the stars
Under the same sky we are
With the winking, twinkling stars.

At twilight, that special light
When some things canít be seen
I remember what it means
To feel the shadow
Where your love for me
Used to be

Then thereís the sun, the sun
Oh how I love this one
Where the directness of the bright light
Makes me feel less lonesome.

 
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Comments & Reviews

BobQuinn
April 02, 2005

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Nice, evokes some wonderful images AND...AND, reminds me of one I wrote on request for a lady some years ago. So I'm gonna did it out and post it, thank you iviedoe!

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TempestOfNature
April 02, 2005

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cool poem ivie lovin this one the twilight of the stars the moon and the sun. thanks for sharing

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April 01, 2005

I've never been able to do this before. I'm gonna get in trouble for sure!

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