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♥ Dew ♥

Author:   iviedoeloves
Created: April 01, 2005 at 07:46 pm
Entry Type: Poem, G (All)
Category: Love | General/Other | General/Other
Entry Stats: 4 Stars by 2 users with 3 comments 286 views
Dew 
I look up into the stars
After a long distance call with you
And I understand that we are
Under the same sky
So why, oh why
Do I still feel so lonesome

Last night I couldn't sleep
Not a wink
Not even a peep
All I could do was think
About why I feel so lonesome

This morning I smelled
The freshness of the dew
And I realized that
Everything reminds
Reminds me of you
And this may be why I feel
So lonesome.

 
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BobQuinn
April 02, 2005

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cheer up, if he has any sense at all...he'll come back.
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TempestOfNature
April 02, 2005

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ohh i feel that way alot sometimes always lonesome always by myself can't stand lonesome to be my best friend. thanks for sharing
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April 01, 2005
Hey Ivie.. so so sweet!
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