May 06, 2009 at 07:56 am
Poem, G (All)
Love | Sad | Contemporary
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a part of being a-part of being apart
throws a struggle so huge into my bloody heart.
may I interest you in a long tall cool glass of me?
call me sweetheart, cup my chin, and kiss me so passionately.
let not our lives wrap up over our eyes,
using mere things as blinders, a thin disguise.
suffocating our selves and each other without panic,
we should be kicking, screaming; trying to live above the attic.
dose by dose and screen to screen we coma in and out.
pages peel forward and toward the world 'round about.
i love you unconditionally, to my very bloody heart's core,
but if you're trying to do yourself in; what is my love good for?
Ivie doe 5.01.09
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