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A Poem by williamwk2



Author: williamwk2
Created: May 03, 2009 at 04:29 am
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Love | Romance | Relationships
Upload Stats: 4.84 Stars by 25 users with 26 comments and 673 views

Something About You  

There is something about your eyes,
and I just canít look away.
Looking into them is its own prize,
That makes me want to stay.

There is something about youíre personality,
That makes me feel so good.
That I loose my mentality,
And I am Misunderstood.

There is something about your smile,
That makes me feel at home.
Something that makes me versatile,
When I used to feel alone.

Copyright © February 2008 - William Kuzma
Soul Poetry Publishing


© williamwk2 - all rights reserved


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MaryJane
September 22, 2009
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I really like this piece right here! It almost seems to me that you can actually convert this into a song .. add a few more verses and paragraphs put in a chorus somewhere.It would def. make an amazing song, you should try it! Great write, loved it keep it up!!


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ThePriestess
September 21, 2009
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Bravo to you my friend. What a very precious piece of writing you have created here.
Clap clap to you.

I have now read absolutely everything that you have posted so far. Thank you again for sharing and allowing me to take a peek inside your mind.
I wish you the very best in life.
Take care and good luck to you,
Timmie


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JustDanielle
June 12, 2009
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This is a wonderful piece,great flow, i enjoyed reading this piece


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LoveLoi20
May 20, 2009
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This is a lovely poem. It show that you have a good heart for the girl. This is you express very well. Good job boy.~Loi~


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mkaila
May 13, 2009
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short n sweet
this is something very lovely n i really enjoyed reading it...well written also..take care


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shannonstarling
May 12, 2009
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Beautiful
Another beautiful poem from William. You are one of the most talented writers on this site, and I enjoy reading your material. A Boyfriend Better than Me was a great piece and I enjoyed it and I also enjoy this one. Good job :] Keep writing and never stop believing in yourself. The most important part of writing is writing something near and dear to your emotions.


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iPodJack
May 12, 2009
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Again... Sorry!


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iPodJack
May 12, 2009
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Nice poem here man, i like it, I like the rhyme and really like the feeling that is ever-present in your writing. Nice job here.
Keep on keepin


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AmieeMay1
May 12, 2009
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anna_marques
May 11, 2009
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Cool!
its good, short, smile, very lovely!!
i love it a lot, keep up the good work, i really enjoyed this, u put a smile on my face
Kisses, Ragdah


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MilesD
May 11, 2009
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great
very much enjoyed for a short poem
it got to the point and expressed it greatly
nice piece of work
looking forward to reading more of yours


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beesweet
May 11, 2009
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VERY SWEET
This is sooooooo sweet.I feel this way about the one I Love.
Good write.


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laurabear
May 08, 2009
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awww thats lovely very heart warming lovely peice of poetry well done my freind


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Sourav
May 08, 2009
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Nice and sweet. Seems very honest poem. Good to read. Well Done!


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kyrab_mtions
May 07, 2009
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Amazing
Hi! Great poem Williamwk2!!!! it has such smoothness ...great flow!!!Lovely poem! you expressed greatly how you feel and the way you see the person for them. Greatly done! Take care keep writing! n thanks for critque!


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chocoletdrop052
May 07, 2009
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Sweet
You were right about this write. For it truly gives insight ....Truly a wonderful piece for
seeking the light.


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SomeWords
May 04, 2009
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nice
that was pretty good, i think the theme was apparent, and the rhyming was sound, but i wish you had gone further. i wish you had explained a little bit more, described one more feature etc. just a thought. either way: great job, keep it up.


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chillin12345
May 04, 2009
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exallent
i really do love your work.this piece is amazing.when i read this i had all of my memories come back all at once. i am in love with a guy that don't even tell me this. he is all talk but, no feelings for me.he might tell me that but, he doesn't mean it. i can tell by the look in his face.i loved how your work rymes and everthing. keep up the good work.


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Thirteen
May 04, 2009
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ditto
I am misunderstood also I dont really care anymore about what they think, being alone is a good thing sometimes because thats when inspiration seems to appear the most.


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MzBoOKiE
May 04, 2009
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Awwwh this is so beautiful..sorry it took me so long to come read your poem..but I really loved it..Its short bt worthwile....This i like very much..and thanks for taking out your time to read my story..


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Kinzo
May 04, 2009
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great job William i really like it

keep it man ; )



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RatuGoblok
May 04, 2009
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Great Write
This was a beautiful piece of poem. I like the title "Something About You and don't forget it. I could feel the power in the eyes of "You" here and the power of personality of "you" here and the power of smile of "you" here. It's very interesting: because of eyes, personality and smile could make a good effect in another people life. It's a great job in great inspiration.

Keep up the good work
Best Regard
Juni Meliala


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dmph84
May 04, 2009
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excellent poem i enjoyed this one great work its nice to see new people here thankyou for the comments you left on my work il look forward to reading more of your work soon kind regards dan



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HPGreg
May 03, 2009
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Nice write
A very nice flow and you have painted this piece well to show how you feel. Talent is seen when you can express your heart like you have in this write. Expressing your love in words for someone in the form of art, comes from the heart.
Thanks for sharing.
HP Greg


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Galacticbeam
May 03, 2009
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I have a hard time relating to poetry not of my generation but that doesn't mean it is not goo; it sounds like rap. I like to look for imagery, although your poem has much feeling whichI liked.


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britpol
May 03, 2009
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Very nice
This is a very nice write. I like the rhyming and the meter. Not too many young people rhme now and that's a pity. Choice of words builds up a nice imagary and makes the reader feel warm. You have a talent young man. Just make sure you use it and don't abuse it.

Britpol


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YoungPoet99
May 03, 2009
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Wow
This is soo, I want to say 'cute' but im not sure thats the right word. If you reciting that to someone I'm sure they'd fall in love with you lol.
I love the rhythm you have going on there it does add something to your poem.

thanks for a really nice read.



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hayleygirl
May 03, 2009
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amazing
this poem is absolutly brilliant i think, your choice of words are excellent and it actually brigs back a memory for me so thank you so much. keep writing more your really good


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