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A Poem by ThunderStorm

Author: ThunderStorm
Created: April 26, 2009 at 12:44 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Romance | Love | Gothic
Upload Stats: 4.66 Stars by 6 users with 6 comments and 697 views

My gothic Angel Anna  

there is a darkness in the air this angel is so deeply in love she's in love with her sweetie gothic angel thunder her name is anna the Queen of all the gothics and the angels the couple was so fall in love together at first light so they went out as a cute couple even they went out for dinner they had a plate of pasta together as a gothic couple they got done with their dinner next they rode on a dragon so they went back to the castle but then Gothic thunder ask Gothic anna if she will marry me and she said yes so in a couple years these sweet gothic angels got married so they went to rome Italy where they went for their honeymoon it was a beautiful place till then they stay at the motel so gothic thunder told his bride i have a suprise for you my sweet anna was in for a good luck charm so while gothic thunder went to the get gothic anna's surpise so finally gothic thunder brought gothic anna's suprise it was a dragon for a pet anna named gothic dragon but then gothic anna told gothic thunder i am pregant thunder was shocked he was going be a father for the first time in his lifetime so in a couple of weeks they are now parents it was a beautiful baby girl her name was gothic lucy so there inculdes my poem to my gothic angel anna XOXOXO

Last Modified: March 18, 2010 at 08:12 pm
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from your friends Gothic thunder and Gothic Anna

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Comments & Reviews ( X 3)

June 25, 2009
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Love it!
Awh this is cute! Love this Thunder! It reminds me of Twilight for some ODD reason lol. Maybe because thats what im reading at the moment but hmm, idk lol. This is great though, very lovey dovey! Keep the amazing work coming Thunder!!

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May 26, 2009
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oh, wow...
This took my breath away. And kudos to this anna person. She must be your inspiration!

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May 22, 2009
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You should take CARE of Anna, or I will kill you (or maybe exactly the opposite) applause to these love couples!

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May 15, 2009
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I find your poetry is presented differently. Very unique. Good job. Keep writing and don't stop believing, a good poem comes from the heart and soul, not the educated mind

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April 26, 2009
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Despite the awkwardness of the way it was presented, this was rather flawless. I didn't really pay attention to whether or not there were grammatical/spelling errors.

The only thing that bugged me was the lack of periods: not a big deal though. I dig it. The rawness of this piece is flaring. Thank you for submitting this!!

p.s. It was also pretty damn cute. great job!

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April 26, 2009
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awww Gothic lucy!!
our little girl!!!
:cry:, its very beautiful, i love it my gothic thunder!!
i love it soo much!!
its very lovely and very sweet of you to write this!
i love it all so very much!!!
thank u thank u a lot for this pretty writing!!
:cry: i like it a lot!!!
your gothic anna!!
KIsses, Ragdah!

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