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A Short Story by ThunderStorm

Author: ThunderStorm
Created: March 21, 2009 at 11:16 am
Upload Type: Short Story, G (All)  
Category: Romance | Spiritual | Dark
Upload Stats: 5 Stars by 2 users with 3 comments and 296 views


He's like lighting comes out of no where and end up getting hurt why must love be so painful Why must you hurt me even lighting is less
painful and compared to you I don't feel pain anymore Because you are
not by my side now I'm happy with lighting blasting through my window
and into the night...

Harvey buckner 12/29/56 11/5/99

Last Modified: March 18, 2010 at 07:35 pm
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Comments & Reviews

September 16, 2009
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i liked it thunder,good job!

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April 19, 2009
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This poem flowed well ... And all though it was sort, it had a lot of detail and really good imagery in it ... I really liked how you compared Lightning to Love ... Because love can be beautiful, and come out of nowhere, and seem harmful ... But when you're actually struck by it, everything goes down hill and bursts into flames ...

- Vampire -

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March 26, 2009
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i like how your said that lighning was less painful than your hurt
its a great write, good job

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