Entry Stats: 5 Stars by 2 users with 3 comments 215 views
He's like lighting comes out of no where and end up getting hurt why must love be so painful Why must you hurt me even lighting is less
painful and compared to you I don't feel pain anymore Because you are
not by my side now I'm happy with lighting blasting through my window
and into the night...
Harvey buckner 12/29/56 11/5/99
Last Modified: March 18, 2010 at 07:35 pm
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This poem flowed well ... And all though it was sort, it had a lot of detail and really good imagery in it ... I really liked how you compared Lightning to Love ... Because love can be beautiful, and come out of nowhere, and seem harmful ... But when you're actually struck by it, everything goes down hill and bursts into flames ...