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A Poem by ThunderStorm


Author: ThunderStorm
Created: March 21, 2009 at 11:03 am
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Love | Spiritual | Arts
Upload Stats: 5 Stars by 2 users with 1 comments and 281 views

life Gaurdian  

You told me that our love was true That we were meant to be That I'd .
have you and you'd have me and from this curse we'd both be free .
But all you are to my sad eyes is just a blurring haze and your soft voice. is sent in whispers that me in a daze And in the end We're torn
apart and locked behind closed doors but when I die You'll take my place. as I had done for yours


Last Modified: March 18, 2010 at 07:33 pm
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kyrab_mtions
April 15, 2009
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wow
truely depth defing..short but its really heartfelt and captures readers interests...
really liked ....this That I'd .
have you and you'd have me and from this curse we'd both be free "

very tender , creative!! keep writing ...il keep reading!!


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JustDanielle
March 26, 2009
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