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A Poem by ThunderStorm


Author: ThunderStorm
Created: March 18, 2009 at 08:27 pm
Upload Type: Poem, T (13+)  
Category: Romance | Gothic | Love
Upload Stats: 4.83 Stars by 3 users with 3 comments and 227 views

my dark heart  

Don't touch me , I don't you to suffer my silence goes on fighting inside.
it will come out one day, the coldness I hide inside Don't touch me .
I don't you to suffer the never ending fight of life my dark heart is filling in
the pain the darkness is filling inside of me i can't stop the anger is
inside of me the dragon is get redder and madder inside of my painful misery life is so stupid inside of my lifetime i just want rotten and burn my stupid heart is filled all the lies i told the anger is trying the gap in
my blood is pumping inside my veins is hurting my heart the gap is agony my fingertips i am asking for my soul and my dark heart


Last Modified: March 18, 2010 at 07:32 pm
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Comments & Reviews ( X 3)



anna_marques
May 07, 2009
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wow!!!!!!
this is beautiful!!!
i loved it tho it was very very dark hehe
i loved the line where u said "it will come out one day, the coldness i hide inside dont touch me"
i loved this a lot thunder, my appluds to u!!
kisses, ragdah _p.s: where have ya been?


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dmph84
March 19, 2009
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excellent
i very much enjoyed that deep with emotions and your style is different to most others great writing il look forward to reading more soon kind regards dan


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JustDanielle
March 19, 2009
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your too bloody good, you make me feel like my pieces are a childs writing next to yours lol,
great piece i like the emotion you put into it


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