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Witches Groom

Author: ThunderStorm
Created: March 11, 2009 at 09:44 pm
Entry Type: Poem, T (13+)
Category: Romance | Dark | Fan Fiction
Entry Stats: 4.58 Stars by 6 users with 7 comments 248 views
Witches Groom 
I walked out in the night my hand's soon froze The air was so chilled it sank deep to my bones i happend to notice her standing there the cold wind wiping her long dark hair I approached her her with a gentle smile
my dear have you been waiting a while? she turned to me with feline eyes her beauty took me by surpise I realized I staring rudely She laughed smiled and beckoned to me the in intoxicating smell as I Drew close She introduced herself simply as rose the gown she wore was elegant black lace it fit her devilish curves with grace she slipped her slender arms through mine her soft word purrs that made sigh she led me smiling down the street A black cat darted past our feet Frogs mocking croaked somewhere near Whispers of shadows filled my ear
slightly fearful I hesitated the world around us evaporated Only the dark pavement remained below Covered in feathers From a black crow blinking I asked if all was well She smiled Dangersouly It's just a spell
like a puppet I could not resist The world vanished in her deceving mist
I wondered briefly what she lacked the classic old broom or the crocked black hat She released me as we reached the end A creeping black widow fell my hand I tried to run but it was too late her voodoo doll controlled my fate we stood now among several graves In her hand appeared a shiny curved blade And I her sacrifice soon to be increase the power for magic X3 her ferocity over, I was left in a tomb My name soon forgotten a black witches Groom


Last Modified: March 18, 2010 at 07:30 pm

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Comments & Reviews ( X 6)

tarantulla81
October 03, 2009

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good. really interesting. i couldnt stop reading it.. and peaking for the end to see what will happen.. u actually got me very curious with this story.
really nice work Thunder. i like it a lot
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ThePriestess
August 09, 2009

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What an entertaining story Thunder. Good job my dear friend.

I can promise you that I would never do that to you honey, I am a White Witch and would never hurt anyone.

Keep up the great work and I look forward to seeing more in the future. I am off to go and read the next chapter in this story.
Timmie
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ThePriestess
August 09, 2009 		Ooops sorry, this is not the story that has additional chapters, It is the one that I am going to read now that has addtional chapters, sorry my friend.
Timmie



plato
July 03, 2009

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Sweet!
Hey thunderstorm, thought this was a cool story as well. The puppet who cannot resist as she smiles dangerously, could sure relate with that! LOL Thanks for all your way kind comments on me poems, much appreciated, peace, Plato
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chillin12345
March 18, 2009

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cool
that is the best that i have read all day you have a true skill or pason for writing
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KaziaRose
March 12, 2009

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well done
Ejoyed the imagery in this piece - great write!
Kaz~
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lastverse
March 11, 2009

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:D
Neat story! Witches Groom, also know as Stay away from pretty ladies! Rofl. punctuation would make it a little easier to read though.......
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maddog
March 11, 2009

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unbelivable
rhymes and is a great love story should turn it into a book
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