A Poem by TheTinGirl

Author: TheTinGirl
Created: March 11, 2009 at 09:39 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: General/Other | Personal | General/Other
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Op. 27  

The soft piano plays as I shut the sun out
Moonlight Sonata Op. 27...
Such a decadence to the senses.
Silence engulfs the daily chaos.
My down barrier wrapped tight.
Left to rest my aching head,
On a softness I don't have to worry about.
The piano plays with it's magical fingers,
On a 9.99 special.
Chaotic, yet subdued.
Much like myself.
A sigh escapes, my back arches,
A simple C note, in a high octave
Grants me a guilty pleasure.
We ride into the softness, sadly.
The monotony of lives-
We cry over the five o'clock traffic.
We cry over freezing families.
We cry in our own confusion,
And inability to understand.
We pray for something more.
Something beautiful and free.
A life where there is no worry,
No pain, or suffering.
We cry for a dream.
Left to drown
Serenaded by Moonlight Sonata.
Op. 27.

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September 13, 2009
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Love this piece right here I admire that your writing always seems to have a freestyle feel to it, like it was written right there and then maybe no editing and re-writing yet I believe you'd have that type of talent to do that. Maybe you should try writing a freestyle piece. I love the feel of this piece and it's 'depth' don't know if that's the right word..?? Great write, I look forward to reading some more from you!!

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April 13, 2009
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Excellent poem.
The imagery, the language,
and the whole general idea of it are all superb.

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March 16, 2009
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You are too good!
You rock! More I read your poems more I am starting to admire your write. Such a talent you are! Another fantastic poem and you write so well. You have that punch... this is what I like. Great!

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March 15, 2009
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Hi Tin, What an incredible piece you have written here. Silence engulfs the daily chaos, decadence to the senses, The soft piano plays as I shut the sun out, what pretty lines, so real. Very talented write you have here, peace, P

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March 14, 2009
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i feel the same way
please check out mine called Dreams its probly what you hope to have as a dream

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March 11, 2009
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Now I want to surf the net for Moonlight Sonata Op. 27 -- never heard it and you've peaked my interest. This is a very well written poem. I like the rhythm, especially how it changes - gets faster and more immediate towards the end which really makes it like listening to classical music. How refreshing! It's no wonder why you are a featured writer.

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