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Break the chains


Author: ThunderStorm
Created: March 11, 2009 at 05:11 pm
Entry Type: Poem, T (13+)
Category: Gothic | Diary Entry | Romance
Entry Stats: 4.5 Stars by 9 users with 12 comments 339 views

Break the chains 
be louder ! be more alive scream at the world your right don't swallow it.
try to hide never go down without a fight why your silience your true passion. drop your mask stop pretending don't Quit dreams because others have them hope was meant to be unmending beacuse You're alaways free to choose body soul heart and mind these were made for you to use even your dreams you never the adventure begin in the first step so many things to see and learn it might be hard don't give up yet
Experince is something you find and earn life is a road its best to share
wish I could tell you what's up ahead never let go of friends that care I hope to meet you at the end one more Question to end this shout It's not
a hard one don't you worry to those who try to drown us out why are you
so Quite when you sorry


Last Modified: March 18, 2010 at 07:25 pm

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Comments & Reviews ( X 4)

MagicMJ
July 31, 2010

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powerful...
I wanna scream and break the silence...
feel alive...

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darkelegy
November 22, 2009

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great deep dark piece...I dig! this one thun! you are indeed a true gothic one same as me...lol! lets keep the silent of the night in twilights!

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Priya
July 10, 2009

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well written
and very dark too
i like ur style of writing
very cool

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XplastiqueX
June 25, 2009

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Awesome!
Very powerful Thunder. Love it bunches lol. Keep up the great work!
~Jenna

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ComaWhite
June 23, 2009

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i love how powerful this is!

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tarantulla81
June 22, 2009

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so true. i agree.
one should always fallow the fire burning inside. it's the best teacher one will ever get.
and whats ahead its not for us to know.

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raidonce
May 04, 2009

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Good
This is really good it seems like you're trying to tell people that you should be yourself and don't let others hold you back.

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dmph84
March 19, 2009

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another excellent write and again different its great to be who you are as an individual there should be no reason for any of us to change because of what others think pleasure to read your words kind regards dan

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Reepz00
March 12, 2009

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Hits home
Reminds me of my tormenting life throughout the years. Its been years of torment and pain. No restraints in my pain, no one can be pitied how ever. All people have to deal with it. But its hard for you and I. But we have to. I guess we can do what we want, or do nothing at all about it. Its our decision. I hope you choose moving on. My writing is hateful, but I hold no grudges. Sorry if I misspelled anything....

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lastverse
March 11, 2009

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This poem makes me want to scream (from inspiration, not because it's bad, lol.) I want to go run a few laps around to burn off energy now because sometimes i feel like this, like i'm in chains. Thanks for posting this! ^_^

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Alesha
March 11, 2009

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i like this poem its really good and ture

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Seven
March 11, 2009

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Great.
I like how it was detailed .. How you said don't quit dreams .. Usually people think that dreams are just a bunch of random things .. But really it's your soul trying to talk to you .. Or at least that's what I believe .. I'm not religious .. But I do believe in the soul .. If no one had a soul .. Then this world would be alot worse I'm sure .. Anyways .. Great write .. Keep writting .. Thanks for sharing your great poem ..

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