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Author: ThunderStorm
Created: March 08, 2009 at 02:36 pm
Entry Type: Poem, G (All)
Category: Romance | Love | Drama
Entry Stats: 4.75 Stars by 4 users with 4 comments 212 views
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it hangs around my neck for everyone to see a symbol of your love gave.
to me it is a silver heart locket from you a token a promise of love like a
ring. this heart has no beginning and no end a gift extremely special
given from my lover and friend and when i am feeling happy or sad even
blue i hold onto that heart close my eyes and picture you No matter now
how i feel or what comes to be when i see your heart I remeber just how
much you love me


Last Modified: March 18, 2010 at 07:18 pm

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XplastiqueX
June 25, 2009

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Awesome!
Aw I love this Thunder!! Makes me think of things in my life. You are very good at writing pieces based on romance, by the way. Cant wait to read more from you!! Keep up the amazing work!!
~Jenna
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ComaWhite
June 23, 2009

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that is so cute. and i love the symbolism of something small that no one would really notice.
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JoanDZombie
May 20, 2009

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thats so cute! you wrote about a locket! usually girls write stuff like that! is there a picture in there of your beloved Anna? and not one of Joan? :cry:.......sorry i couldn't write this fast enough because my dad wanted me to set the table and stuff for dinner....5-20-09.......and he wants me to do stuff...............poor daddy wants me to do stuff!!! hey i will see you in the chat box if you dont mind........but we are making meatloaf and we want you to come over to have some meat loaf.....(so that i dont have to have any)!! atho i do kinda like it...so you wont be able to have all of it!..........you get to have green beans instead!!! YUMMIYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY
was that too many "Y's" ????ok well i will use another letter................rrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr
or how about pppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp
sorry.....i want points!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
and i know i will not be robbing you of any points!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ok now i am sure to get alot of points with this one!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
sorry again....
Your
Friend
Joan
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lastverse
March 08, 2009

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<3
I love your love poems! I wish i could live them out.

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