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loves shall flaw


Author: ThunderStorm
Created: March 08, 2009 at 02:21 pm
Entry Type: Poem, G (All)
Category: Romance | Love | Drama
Entry Stats: 4.75 Stars by 2 users with 2 comments 219 views

loves shall flaw 
It will catch up to you wheather you want it to or not make your heart.
swell and tie it up in a knot you won't know what it is but you feel it.
inside your feelings for this person well up inside then no matter how near each word or phase she says You'll always told them dear


Last Modified: March 18, 2010 at 07:17 pm

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beesweet
April 06, 2009

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Great
Love is great when it is true and commited.have a good
day thunder.you penned your heart.take care.

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lastverse
March 08, 2009

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lovey lovey!
Nice!! I accurately portrays the almost painful side of loving someone to death. The feeling of wanting to explode with love

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