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A Poem by ThunderStorm


Author: ThunderStorm
Created: March 04, 2009 at 09:11 pm
Upload Type: Poem, T (13+)  
Category: Romance | Diary Entry | Friendship
Upload Stats: 4.75 Stars by 8 users with 8 comments and 287 views

thunderstorm  

In times of darkness In times of war The warriors will ride like never before. In search to Conquer The unholy night The Sound of thunder.
Will bring us to fight Black horse will ride for me. Into the sky. I will fight Until The day I die Thunderstorm blows my mind The Magic Spell. that Makes blind thunderstorm. One of a kind The legend that Won't leave us
behind. We are fighting the dragon With Fire and steel Only In blood and
pain. The beast will kneel In death or glory Immortal we stand So We.
will defend Our holy land Black Horse will ride for me I will Fight Until The
day I die thunderstorm blows my mind The magic Spell that Makes Me
Blind. Thunderstorm One of a kind The legend That Won't leave us behind.


Last Modified: March 18, 2010 at 07:06 pm
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KimberleeShantel
October 24, 2010
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This poem brings me back to my tenth grade ancient history class for some reason or another. I had some of the best times of my entire life in that class, so thanks so much for unknowingly doing that.

This poem flows together quite well; it's very well written. Mind your commas here, as well, though.

Keep up the great writing!


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GABSTBOZ
August 07, 2010
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Hi Thunder
Great flow " In times of darkness In times of war The warriors will ride like never before."

Smiles
Gabs


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545maxwell
February 10, 2010
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good
this was good, im guessing it was made to describe you


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coenraadvliet
June 11, 2009
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Ones again great
Goodness. Your a powerful writer. Well done man

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you like music to the musician... or else it is nothing, an empty, formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their nots and explanations.
- -F. Scott Fitzgerald

(Remember to return the favour and give a review back and be brutally honest. Nothing to learn from fake smiles)


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LuciaElisa
March 24, 2009
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JoanDZombie
March 06, 2009
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Awesome Thunderstorm! this is sooooooooooooooooooooooooo great! and I think you can do more poems and stuff! very sweet!


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plato
March 05, 2009
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Nice!
Hi Thunder, great writing very strong, great imagery and fun to read. Fighting the dragon with fire and steel only in blood and pain, awesome line! Cheers, P


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opie2010
March 04, 2009
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Bravo!
I love it! Good Job on your piece.


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anna_marques
March 04, 2009
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Beautiful!
i liked it a lot, its very pretty (since i am stupid i had troubles with it a little ) but to hell with me, it was fantastic, keep it up _wonderful!!
kisses, ragdah


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