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♥ in spite of me ~ ♥

Author:   iviedoeloves
Created: March 01, 2009 at 04:45 pm
Entry Type: Poem, G (All)
Category: Spiritual | Non Fiction | Contemporary
Entry Stats: 5 Stars by 4 users with 4 comments 236 views
in spite of me ~ 


In spite of me

at times i do stuff i don't want to do,
because, i must really want to do them~
so i've got a lot of praying to do,
that mistakes do not take me away again.

i walk up and down the hallway,
from my room until i reach the kitchen~
burning desires alight all through me,
toes curling and my hands are itching.

my head spins around many matters,
all of my days and into my every night~
so i've got a lot of praying to do,
i'm praying it will all to turn out right.

Iviedoe 2.2009

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Comments & Reviews ( X 4)

roselora
April 18, 2009

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awesome
good one................love it
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BobQuinn
April 02, 2009

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Bang on
You speak for me as well and undoubtedly many others.
Very well put.
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emk69
April 01, 2009

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Raw emotions
Really gripping piece
feels like your words
are dripping off the page
Such intensity
Great job
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lyrycsyntyme
March 01, 2009

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What a torment..
I almost have to believe that the only person who couldn'd find a way to relate to this, would have to be someone with absolutely no inhibitions what's so ever. The second verse, just stunning to me. It felt like words from moments in my life, i only wish i could have expressed so perfectly.
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