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A Haiku by ThunderStorm


Author: ThunderStorm
Created: March 01, 2009 at 02:45 pm
Upload Type: Haiku, G (All)  
Category: Haiku | Friendship | Fantasy
Upload Stats: 4.62 Stars by 4 users with 6 comments and 469 views

JoanDZombie  

joan are the Queen of england you are the one to help me with my.
sickness and you are the gate i hold the key to your gate and i love my. boyfriend we have the sprits of the wolfs of the next generation you are. the legend of your time good luck and may god treat you well i am sorry. you lost your favorite teacher i lost my 5th grade teacher Mrs.love. she was trustworthy i love her may her soul rest in peace


Last Modified: March 18, 2010 at 07:01 pm
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Comments & Reviews



coenraadvliet
June 11, 2009
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Too bias
Well I'm not much for Haiku's. So I'm not really going to leave much of a review here or a rating. I'm a bit too bias here.

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you like music to the musician... or else it is nothing, an empty, formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their nots and explanations.
- -F. Scott Fitzgerald

(Remember to return the favour and give a review back and be brutally honest. Nothing to learn from fake smiles)


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Daisuke
May 22, 2009
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LOL!
Joan is laughing (I think) this is a good work buddy, KEEP IT UP!


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AshleyBanks
March 02, 2009
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naaaaah
I am confused. This one is muddled up. The one I read before was great!


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classic13
March 01, 2009
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Hay
That was a great poem and I agree with each one; Beautiful and honest I love it keep it up.


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JoanDZombie
March 01, 2009
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All right! I love it but I am not going to rate you down just because Courtney doesn't know what a haiku is...but I still love it! Thank you for writing this!...


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XoXharmonyXoX
March 01, 2009
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confusing...
I'm really confused on this. It doesn't seem to have a clear point to it. It could have the potential to be a poem, you just can't have these ideas crammed together randomly. It could use a little work!


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