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JoanDZombie

Author: ThunderStorm
Created: March 01, 2009 at 02:45 pm
Entry Type: Haiku, G (All)
Category: Haiku | Friendship | Fantasy
Entry Stats: 4.62 Stars by 4 users with 6 comments 435 views
JoanDZombie 
joan are the Queen of england you are the one to help me with my.
sickness and you are the gate i hold the key to your gate and i love my. boyfriend we have the sprits of the wolfs of the next generation you are. the legend of your time good luck and may god treat you well i am sorry. you lost your favorite teacher i lost my 5th grade teacher Mrs.love. she was trustworthy i love her may her soul rest in peace


Last Modified: March 18, 2010 at 07:01 pm

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coenraadvliet
June 11, 2009

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Too bias
Well I'm not much for Haiku's. So I'm not really going to leave much of a review here or a rating. I'm a bit too bias here.

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you — like music to the musician... — or else it is nothing, an empty, formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their nots and explanations.
- -F. Scott Fitzgerald

(Remember to return the favour and give a review back and be brutally honest. Nothing to learn from fake smiles)
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Daisuke
May 22, 2009

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LOL!
Joan is laughing (I think) this is a good work buddy, KEEP IT UP!
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AshleyBanks
March 02, 2009

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naaaaah
I am confused. This one is muddled up. The one I read before was great!
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classic13
March 01, 2009

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Hay
That was a great poem and I agree with each one; Beautiful and honest I love it keep it up.
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JoanDZombie
March 01, 2009

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All right! I love it but I am not going to rate you down just because Courtney doesn't know what a haiku is...but I still love it! Thank you for writing this!...
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XoXharmonyXoX
March 01, 2009

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confusing...
I'm really confused on this. It doesn't seem to have a clear point to it. It could have the potential to be a poem, you just can't have these ideas crammed together randomly. It could use a little work!
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