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♥ -xox- in awe -xox- ♥


Author:   iviedoeloves
Created: February 28, 2009 at 10:57 pm
Entry Type: Poem, G (All)
Category: Romance | Love | Contemporary
Entry Stats: 5 Stars by 1 users with 2 comments 305 views

-xox- in awe -xox- 


-xox- in awe -xox-

day into night I am beaming~
slappy, happy, nappy dreaming.

a dream to me~
dream to me,
oh, oh, oh, you~
are my dream come true!

in awe I listen to you~
as you watch me be who
i am, and it's alright.
everyday and all night!

and I see you,
the real man who
i love~

and I see you sitting there,
across the table in your chair
after you scooted me and my chair in.
before you even sat down to begin,
to pour our tea,
while looking at me~
taking your time,
so attractive and fine,

we talk and laugh aloud~
in the middle of any crowd.
folks peak at us with loving envy,
as we drip with lust, love, truth, and honesty~
for they can actually see us glow~
as bold as the hurricanes blow,
after all..
it's “the you and me show” !!!

slappy, happy, nappy dreams~
yes, what we have is as good as it seems.
rainbows, dragonflies, and noon sunbeams.
our love is large, it rocks, it screams!!!

iviedoe 2009

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Comments & Reviews ( X 1)

XoXharmonyXoX
February 28, 2009

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Personally, I love it! It's pretty good! I can relate to this, and the writer is clearly in love, and the purpose is seen clearly! Now, the rhyming is good, making it something that some people (including me) would probably sing! It looks kindof like lyrics to me. and LOL "the you and me show" XD very cute and thought out! Keep it up!

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AnnaandJames
February 28, 2009

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you have made me laugh with your write.. it is so lay back, i wish I was there too... blessings, your new friends in poetry.. anna and james

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