Great poem. You can realy feel and hear the passion and the love. It's realy hard to ryme any poem and to keep the deep meaning to it is even harder, I'm amazed at your talent. Keep up the great woork
You progress and still I feel its you who wrote this. Love how the love is shown and expressed in this poem
Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you — like music to the musician... — or else it is nothing, an empty, formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their nots and explanations.
- -F. Scott Fitzgerald
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This was beautiful amazing and so much more that words cannot explain it, as well as the fact that it rhymed which was seriously really really cool. I bet this one is about your soul mater. Glad you finally posted some of your work on here. Keep up the great job! Thunder+ Courtney= Forever!
This write is a very nice testament to a person you obviously care very deeply for. The only thing that jumps out at me is on step six the last word should be plural. it should have an s on the end of it. Well written. I liked it. Gene Kistenmacher.