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A Poem by ThunderStorm


Author: ThunderStorm
Created: February 25, 2009 at 05:32 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Love | Friendship | Friendship
Upload Stats: 4.57 Stars by 7 users with 8 comments and 315 views

7 steps to heaven  

the first step is in her kind eyes that shows she is very wise.

the second step is in her red lips that match her finger tips.

the third step is in her voice A voice that would make the heavens rejoice.

the fourth step is in her ears I could nibble on them for years.

fifth step is her nose it is as pretty as a rose.

sixth step is in her beautiful hair that matches anything she wear:

seventh step is to her heart so that we may never part Heaven is when I

found you.


Last Modified: March 18, 2010 at 06:52 pm
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Comments & Reviews ( X 4)



elphie
May 26, 2012
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Love is a piece of heaven on earth. Beautifully written.


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FrankReeves
August 17, 2010
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I don't get to much into poetry myself, but the poem is good.


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Darkmoon
November 27, 2009
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Wonderful
Wow, so expressive! It's so smooth sounding and perfectly structured with the descriptions wow, a nice one you've got there!


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EmilyTazen
June 21, 2009
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Awesome
Great poem. You can realy feel and hear the passion and the love. It's realy hard to ryme any poem and to keep the deep meaning to it is even harder, I'm amazed at your talent. Keep up the great woork
Emily


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coenraadvliet
June 11, 2009
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Loving every step
You progress and still I feel its you who wrote this. Love how the love is shown and expressed in this poem

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you like music to the musician... or else it is nothing, an empty, formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their nots and explanations.
- -F. Scott Fitzgerald

(Remember to return the favour and give a review back and be brutally honest. Nothing to learn from fake smiles)


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GABSTBOZ
February 25, 2009
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sweet
well done .

Smiles


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classic13
February 25, 2009
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All I can Say is
This was beautiful amazing and so much more that words cannot explain it, as well as the fact that it rhymed which was seriously really really cool. I bet this one is about your soul mater. Glad you finally posted some of your work on here. Keep up the great job! Thunder+ Courtney= Forever!


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katsman
February 25, 2009
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Well Done
This write is a very nice testament to a person you obviously care very deeply for. The only thing that jumps out at me is on step six the last word should be plural. it should have an s on the end of it. Well written. I liked it. Gene Kistenmacher.


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